Project #17584 - Rewrite & Fix / Argumentative Essay

Hello, attached you will find the paper that needs to be fixed and added on to. It requires argument supporting the fact Catholic Church is protecting the priests guilty of child molestation. The paper is for the video "Deliver Us From Evil". You can watch it by going to this link http://www.filmsforaction.org/watch/deliver_us_from_evil_2006/ here is what I got from the teacher that needs to be done to it.

“You need to make this an argumentative essay.  It is an essay where YOU the writer must take a stand on the issues raised in the film.  This is not a film review.  This is not a rhetorical analysis.  Your thesis should communicate your argument and your essay exists solely to develop, support and prove that thesis.  It's all about you.  The film and the other sources you've gathered exist ONLY to provide you with evidence for the claims you are making in the essay.  You can argue whatever you want, as long as it is in the ballpark of the film's subject matter.   If you want to argue essentially the same argument as the film's you can, but you will need to do it on your own terms.  In other words, you have to do more than simply parrot the film's argument.  You need to provide, perhaps, another reason or two.  You need to put it in your own words, and find other evidence to support the argument.” 

I am trying to argue that Catholic Church has lost its moral standing because its protecting the priests accused of child molestation which is a criminal behavior. I need to prove that point in light of the video by using 5 outside sources that show nothing is being done about this subject by the church. Please note this teacher checks online for plagiarism and essay addon /fix must be original. I have another big project after this that I can give yo you if you do a good job.

Thank you for your help.

 

Subject English
Due By (Pacific Time) 11/24/2013 06:00 pm
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