Project #44531 - formal analysis

I have marked corrections to be made. I need this to be a A quality paper. I will pay extra if need be. 

It needs a stronger thesis statement that holds every paragraphs together. I HAVE ATTACHED AN Example paper. PLEASE HAVE A LOOK and see the STRUCTURE organization and emulate it. 

A good art humanities paper will:

 

Presents a possible answer to a question (e.g.: What is the connection between form and meaning for this work?). Ideally, your paper will present your argument at the beginning (your “thesis”), present evidence for the argument throughout the body of the paper, and draw some conclusions at the end.
Focuses on the object. You should fully describe the formal characteristics of the work and incorporate this description into the body of your paper. '

Expectations and Grading

Thesis/ focus – Presents a main focus or argument at the beginning of the paper and develops this through the body of the paper.
Content – Presents an interesting argument that seeks to probe the material in depth.

Acknowledges the questions put forth in the assignment. Demonstrates original and independent thinking. Clearly and thoroughly describes the art object. Organization and development – Creates a clearly identifiable introduction, body and conclusion. Presents one main idea per paragraph, and develops the train of thought logically throughout the paper. Has a clear sense of order that is appropriate for the thesis.

Mechanics – Has been both spell-checked and proofread to ensure that there are no spelling, grammar or punctuation errors; follows formatting/length instructions for the assignment.

An A paper exceeds expectations. The thesis is sophisticated and clearly developed throughout the paper. It presents an argument that makes for lively discussion. The object of art is thoroughly explored, yet the paper goes beyond a recitation of facts to present critical thinking that is broad, deep and relevant to the topic. The author has a sophisticated use of language that easily engages the reader, manipulates sentence length to enhance the total effect of the essay, and uses precise language that expresses complex ideas. If the assignment incorporates research, the author demonstrates a familiarity with a variety of appropriate sources.

 

Subject English
Due By (Pacific Time) 10/24/2014 12:00 am
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