Project #49220 - Epidemiology

This homework was earlier written by another instrcutor that I am finding difficult to reach. The assignment is missing some key elements and my instructor sent it back to me with a clear direction to re-submit it. Here is my instructor's comment and feedback when i turned it in the first time: "Overall, you write well.  However, most of the paper is general statements without data to back up the statements.  Simply stating no correlation exists is not enough.  Show me the stats that prove this.  There is no data presented at all in this paper.  Also, you are not citing throughout the paper.  Your format, sources, and spelling and grammar meet standards.  See attached for detailed comments. I suggest that you re-write based on these comments. 

 

Rubric:

"Content:  7.5/15 (lacks details and statistics)

Format:   5/5

Spelling/grammar:   5/5

Use of references: 3/5 (1 reference missing full citation, you do not use in-text citations enough throughout the paper)".

 

 

Basically my instructor wants statistical reports and graph to support my paper. Mere looking at the above rubric, you will see that the CONTENT and the USE OF REFERENCE are the only two areas where my instructor want me to really work on, but everyother area is good. I have two attachments: the paper that needs to be adjusted and the prototype  that my instructor wants. 

 

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