Project #51198 - Analytical

1)Transmittal letter referred to Victoria business school transmittal letter. On their memo, there are 3 parts, the purpose of the report, indication of future actions being proposed

Abstract should be called executive summary should be developed more with 3 headings( purpose and method of this report, finding and conclusion, recommendation for increasing such and such) …referred to victoria business school as well

On abstract:

1st paragraph last sentence…..Define HER. “The World Wide Web applications provision has made it easy for dentists to apply the EHR.” Unclear, said that if it’s a journal or what is it?

2nd paragraph sec sentence…….Paper work in the dental clinic standalone ( no verb)

this means that records in manual forms cannot be integrated with other paper forms or information hence there is a need for going paperless in the dental clinic (run on sentence)

2nd paragraph, last sentence: This report will analyze the benefits and downsides of using electronic systems in the dental clinic, steps of coming up with these systems will be provided and the last part will include the recommendations (run on sentence)

 

Introduction: frist sentence “As digitization of practices in many sectors is being realized, many options are presenting themselves , the health care sector has come up with ways of incorporating technology in health care deliver” ( run on sentence) should be a noun

 

 

 

Subject English
Due By (Pacific Time) 12/09/2014 12:00 am
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