Project #51385 - editing/ revision

must complete in 10 hrs

 so basicaly i need editing for my final draft based on teacher comments. i will attech teachers comments and original essay.and below r the instructions.

 

 Topic : write about something along the lines of the effect of online dating on society (one in which whether or not it is effective or successful is certainly an essential part of the equation)? Your paper can also explore, to some degree, its history, and who the various factions are (those who laud it, profit from it...; those who decry it, point to it as one of society's ills, rather than seeing it as fulfilling some kind of essential niche, etc All the links must be used from this database website: http://libguides.ccny.cuny.edu/content.php?pid=229190&sid=1895624

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Foryour  research  paper  this  semester,  Iwant  you  to  select  acontentious,   or  hotlycontested,   subject  that  is  st1//  contentious   (inotherwords,  it  should  be  current)—thisshould  be  a  topic  that  interests  you,  and  about  which  you  hope  to  learn  more—and  gointo  greater   depth  researching   this   subject   or  phenomenon,   defining  what   makes  thissuch  a  contentious  issue  and  then  exploring  its  depths.  Find  something  that  piques  yourinterest  and  that  you  would  like  to  know  more  about.  Inmy  opinion,  it  would  bepointless  to  select  something  that  doesn’t  interest  you.

 

 

Afteryouhavefinisheddelvingintothecontentiousissueindepth(inroughlyfivepagesormore),explainhowthisissueinformsourunderstandingoftruthandhowdeterminingthe“truth”oftheissueaffectsus.Thisshouldtakeupaboutapageortwo.

 

 

Additionally,inatleastoneortwopages,relatewhatyouare writingabouttoclassreadings.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Makesuretoexplainwhatmakesyourissuecontentious.  Themoresourcesyouareable

 

toaccumulate,themoreinsightyouwilllikelybeabletoofferintotheissue.


Oneofthegoalsoftheresearchpaperistobeobjective:don’tusetheword“I,”and,as youwrite,trynottothinkabouthowyoupersonallyfeelaboutthesubject.Instead,tryto offerthereaderinsightintothegreatcomplexityofyoursubject,frommultiplelaterals.

 

 

Furthermore,asidefromintheintroductionandconclusion(andinintroductoryortransitionalphrases),itshouldbeabsolutelyclearwhereyougottheinformation.Eveniftheinformationiscommonknowledge,itshouldbecited.Iofferedexamplesofhowyoumight dothisintheassignmentsheetforMicrotheme#3andsubsequentlyinmylongerannouncement  postings.

 

 

Any instanceofplagiarism—evenifit’sasinglesentence—willresultinazeroscoreand anFintheclass.  Citeyoursources.

 

 

Thefinaldraft,mustbeaminimum  ofsevenpages,double—spaced.  Theworkscitedpageisnot includedinthiscount.Itwould  makesensetoincludeaworks  citedpageinyourfirst draft,butitdoesnothavetobecomplete.Inthefinaldraft,itmustbe.

  

Checklist(don’tturninyouressayunti1you’vecheckedtoseethatyou’vedonethe

 following):

 

 

          Left—marginyournameatthetopoftheessay,alongwiththedate,thetitleofthe course,thewords“ResearchPaper”andthedraftnumber(inthiscase,“Draft#1,”or “Draft#2”).   Putatitleontheessay,andcenterit.

          Useatleastsevendifferentsources.   OnesourcemaybeasourceIhaveprovided you.  Twosourcesmustbebooks.  YoumavnotuseInternetsourcesunlesstheycome fromKBCClibrary’selectronicdatabases).  Encyclopediaanddictionarieswillnotbe counted  amongyour  sevensources,thoughyou  mayusethem.

          Thepapermustincludeaworkscited page,completedinproperMLAform.

 

          Propercitationsmustalwaysaccompanyquotationsfromyoursources:ex.“Greggrew paleagainasIsaidthis”(Sacks71).

Subject English
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