Project #5187 - Psychological differences between boys and girls are better understood from a social r

Hi, This is a psychology argumentative essay, its like a debate, i have uploaded what i have written, and my professor has a list of complaints, and i jus cant write it anymore, jus too confused, would someone be able to help me fix it? 

She claims that the contents in the essay are correct, but doesnt have a strong argument. 

she would like me to make my stand at the end of the introduction, and relate every point in every paragraph back to the question, at the discussion section the argument should be stronger. conclusion should be longer. 

And i should rearrange my paragraphs following the affirmative sections first than the negative sections, in this case: social view first, than biological. 

 

can someone help me. 

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Due By (Pacific Time) 04/29/2013 05:00 pm
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