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Iraq for Sale

                In this film, it especially talks about a company, Haliburton. This company had a contract with the U.S government to support daily necessaries and construction materials for soldiers in Iraq. The company was supposed to deliver good condition of materials, foods, waters, and etc. However, the Haliburton was only focused on their profits instead of focusing on soldiers. Some of people realized that there were problems on supporting the soldiers, and they asserted about this issue. Unfortunately, it did not work out well because of the powerful politicians who had secret relationship with the company.  I found some of government failures from this film. I do not doubt that government could have done differently.

 

                There was a man who worked for the Haliburton in Iraq. He was former water purification specialist. He went there to provide clean and safe water for the military. He tested water storage tanks and he found out that the water was extremely contaminated. The U.S government knew about this problem. However, the powerful senators, who had relationship with the Haliburton, helped the company, and they were keeping doing unlawful businesses. The U.S government is existed to help citizens to keep away from the enemies. But, the government did not block them up and actually they helped the company to hurt the soldiers. If the government was organized with upright people who have not relationship with the big company and only doing their job as a senator, this problem never happened. This kind of situation has to be eliminated and the senators has to be banned from the U.S

 

 

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