Project #73904 - fix rough draft

please take teachers remarks and fix rough draft in attached file and add content and citations inside the body. possible to add graphs, pictures or charts.

Teacher remarks

"Amount of content: Need more words.  Include a section with an overviewopening paragraph telling readers what to expect in terms of information to be presented in the section and how it relates to other sections

Writing style:  layperson will have difficulty understanding the content and will be likely to zone 

out on the section

Layout:  sections need level 1 and level 2 headings

Editing:  too early to tell

Citations – where information from a specific organization is used, cite the organization.  Same for a specific person.  Also be sure that every end citation has a corresponding in-text citation and vice versa.

Content Originality:  Turninit.com score is satisfactory"

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Due By (Pacific Time) 06/14/2015 05:00 pm
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