Project #77314 - final editing of dissertation

i needed editting of the disseration attached. 

 

The following  is what the professor said:

 

I have made notes in the text on what should be in each section; the findings , analysis etc. and how  you should format the tables. I do not understand –and you do not say- why you have split the questionnaire items into lots of little tables rather than report all the questionnaire results in a single or two tables-the usual way of presenting this type of data.

 

In addition you have claimed the evidence shows things which it cannot possibly show. The  most you can say is which type of answer was most common (in the results section) and why this might be (in the analysis) and how this links to the literature you reviewed (from the literature review) which you do in the discussion.

 

Follow the formatting example I have given you; put the question data in a single table and thereafter write about each question the result as you have done already-you can use the words as you have written them in this version (in a series of paragraphs) referring at each point to your main table. 

 

In the analysis section, summarise these results and say what you think they mean and then discuss these summary points in your discussion section linking your ideas to your literature review sources.

 

When you have done this send me the draft – the whole thesis –as a single document and I can comment further on it then.

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