Project #7981 - Revise Essay

I need these Essay to be revised. Revise the errors and make it sounds clear not confusing. Feel free to add anything or change the whole thing. The subject is Becoming an Adult and the Associated Responsibilities. It has to be full 3 pages long and it can be doubled spaced. 

 

Becoming an Adult and the Associated Responsibilities

Adulthood is the gradual changes that come to a person through the course of journey of life. Adulthood is, simply speaking, state like other stages life childhood or old age. What is most striking about this particular stage is the associated burden of responsibilities and the amount of loyalty that an adult person has to abide by. Also, try to maintain always, an adult has to be showcase seriousness or have to be of very rough and tough mentality. If the situation demands, an adult must always step up and be serious and proactive. For example, it can be financing a car loan, arranging required amount of money for sister’s marriage or purchasing a house, and the lists are simple countless. As an adult, one has to take up the responsibility boldly, and try with the kind of attitude like ‘Arise and awake and stop not till the goal is reached’ as mentioned by Swami Vivekananda. Therein lies the great weight, which an adult always carries that make this time different than other life stages. The above paragraph just gives a brief introduction, so far the traits of adulthood is concerned, but it needs much elaboration in order to fully realize its actual importance, and hence, properly channelizing the necessary efforts in the right path so that maximum amount of gain can be actualized.

 The term ‘Adult’ itself sounds so astounding, but in the reality it is very hard to keep up with the amount of dedication, as well as to meet up with the quotidian challenges that an adult has to surpass daily. If we try to think the daily routine of any adult, then it would become evident. An adult, starting from bed-rise, has to make arrangements for cooking. So, that person has to go to the market to purchase necessary commodities, not exceeding the required limit so that nothing is wasted. Once back to home, if he or she is doing a job, then that is great, they prepare for that day, and head towards office. Once there, they have to carefully and diligently execute all the required activities pertaining to the kind of sector in which that person is working. This once again, is a huge challenge since one has to be scrupulously serious in order to able to keep one’s head cool and successfully execute each and every task being in the office environment, while, at the same time, managing the other environmental factors, which unlimitedly try to hinder the smooth running of work. There are many of these factors. First, there is peer pressure growing up within the person to deliver more and more towards work as naturally as one goes on delivering a good job. Then, with time the amount of expectation just keeps soaring high. Secondly, surpassing the amount of risk, that each and every task contains in general. Finally, keeping up good terms with your boss and other teammates. As for me, one of the most challenging factor that I feel being an adult is the most easy and again, the most hard work in the world since it requires self-flamboyance and posing one’s mingling with your colleagues, and your top bosses, and these very qualities are in most cases are inborn qualities. They are not possessed by all, and in other words we can say it is ‘God Gifted’ but that said, even though one does not possess these extra qualities then he or she must not step back from nurturing, polishing the inner qualities and present oneself in front of the outside world, since what is most important it to remain active always as one remains continuously active then gradually the self-confidence keeps on going upwards, and can reach to such an extent that can easily help immensely in lifting the position of an adult in work life culture. Then, while returning back home, that very person has to take up the task, once again to complete any necessary work. Like, purchasing cooking utensils or some ornaments to be presented for near and dear ones marriage or other occasions. Here one has to be decisive in the process of purchase, for if they fail, the process is bound to turn into a catastrophe. If the person is married, then the responsibility rises many fold. In addition to  maintaining the work and owns life, one has to take up the extra responsibility of another person. They, in every way, have to be loyal to wife and keep her happy and in this respect the importance of being loyal other than anything else is of paramount importance, so far the long standing’s of one’s relationship is concerned. Marriage is kind of mutual trust, so the trust must come from both ends. Even though one end fails to keep up to it in some way, the other party must not lose control and must assess the situation, and, if reasonable, must try to re-unite again by forgiving all sorts of grievances. All these are related to any ones personal life when he or she goes though the journey of life, and there are many more such added responsibilities that one may think of. For example, arranging requisite amount of money for self-financing a car loan, or getting the contact information of financial institution in this regard. Learning some newer processes as fast as possible, skills can be deployed in actual work life and thereby its actual effects can be purview of an adult’s routine activities. In this way it becomes clear as crystal that it is the adulthood period of man’s life when that very person has to take up these added pressure and responsibilities, and has to strive hard to meet up these work pressure, and associated challenges through the course of day-to-day life. It is this untiring attitude, earnest dedication towards work, being self-confident, obeying one’s parents and in every way being able to look after for the wholesome betterment of not only one’s own family, but society on a whole. Also, thinking for the betterment of one Nation is a vital traits that can be, in general, anticipated out of a adult person. Finally, we can say that it is that stage of life when a person has to remain as active, and vibrant as possible to arrange the meal for day to day basis and also to save for the future days. 

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Due By (Pacific Time) 06/22/2013 12:00 am
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