Project #83233 - three acticles grammar skills check

Do a grammar check of the following three actirles (make a change if it's worng)

1.

Freewriting is a situation where a writer pens down or types raw ideas with disregard to errors and order. He or she jots down what they are thinking at the moment which assists him or her in generating original work after correctly ironing out the work. Given that freewriting should be the fastest way you write down new ideas you get, I would prefer handwritten text over typing.

Handwritten free writing is generally a faster way for me to write down for a continuous period of time. It allows for me to check my handwriting after the work is complete and check grammatical errors in my text which in turn helps me improve my writing. Some typing software have a much enhanced auto- fix system which kicks in instantly thus changing your text for grammatical purposes. This may lead to over-reliance on the software in typing grammar correct text which in turn reduces my chances of developing in the language. A person’s handwriting is unique to each individual. Handwritten text makes it easier to improve my handwriting as best as I can. This may not be so important in the digital trending world but some fields require personal handwritten text thus the need for a good handwriting. It has also been discovered that better letter recognition is achieved through handwritten text. On the negative, handwritten text is always untidy due to the nature of freewriting. Freewriting requires continued writing for a period of time which becomes tiresome to the individual compared to typing.

 

2.

The student used various strategies in this sample. The first strategy is creation of host-guest relationship. Characters in this sample are named depending on their eating habits; Ginger Nut, Turkey, and Nippers. The language used in this essay also resonates with the eating habits of the characters. In order to bring out a true picture of what a good host-guest relationship entails, the narrator acts as the host while Bartleby acts as the guest. The imagery of food is also used to create a host-guest relationship.

This sample provokes thoughts of the reader in various ways. Given the fact that the narrator is an employer and at the same time the host, the reader is likely to ask many questions some of which may be confusing. Additionally, how the three guests got their names remains a question worth asking. The confusing part of this sample is where the student brings in the idea of Wall Street and hunger. The language of hunger is indicative of unattainable ambitions.

 

3.

I came across several fallacies while reading the GoogleNews article. The first fallacy I came across while reading the article was the fallacy of hasty generalization. The audience believes that if Mr. Bleier made a mistake or fumbled during his presentation, no one would notice it. Instead, he will shift the blame to a voodoo woman whom he believes cursed him plus other members of his team just before the start of the New Orleans Saints game. The other fallacy exhibited in this article is slippery slope. Mr. Bleier believes that America has learned nothing from the 58,000 lives lost during the Vietnam War. His argument is based on the fact that many Americans are still dying in battlefields.

The other fallacy in this article is appeal to authority fallacy. In his narration, Mr. Bleier uses a quote from a newspaper article. This quote states that America has chosen on amnesia instead of history. It is this quote which he uses to express his anger on how many people are being injured in Iraq and Afghanistan while at the same time some still commit suicide at home. The fallacy presented in the article is ad hominem. Instead of defending his narration before sitting doing, Mr. Bleier was the audience not to take seriously whatever his teammates were going to say. In that case, he makes the audience not to trust what Mr. Bleier’s teammate were going to say. In addition, when Mel Blount heard people saying that Rocky was a great football player, he talked ill of him by say that he could not be a good footballer because he could not even walk. 

Subject English
Due By (Pacific Time) 09/22/2015 06:00 pm
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