Project #84889 - Business English

I need final draft.

I attached my first draft below.

Plz revise with using this feedback.

 

 

 

<Feedback form professor>

I think this is a good start to your product review. What I would encourage you to focus on in your revision is to organize the topics you are discussing, as well as clearly identifying the criteria you used/how you evaluated the headphones. 

For example, when I read through your review it seems that you are judging the headphones by sound quality, design, etc. If that's so, consider listing the criteria and then having one paragraph for each topic you are discussing. This will help your readers to both read and understand your review.

Also, I didn't see a link or a screen shot to show where you posted this review online. Please include that in your revision as well.

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Due By (Pacific Time) 10/06/2015 08:00 am
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