Good evening to all you wonderful scholars,
Due date is 10/11/15 @ 7pm pacific time.
Single spaced, Times New Roman 12-point font (3 Paragraphs)
Consider the feedback you received in the Module Two Discussion. Before applying feedback, remember that this is your writing. Your peers may have approached the same topic idea or working thesis statement differently.Your job is not to make everyone happy but to make your writing the best that it can be. Write a brief reflective essay on the feedback you received in the Module Two Discussion. What one thing was helpful? Was there something you liked but decidedly ultimately not to use?
Here is my original post ;
I chose the topic of human trafficking since it is an area of study in which, most people have no idea what is happening and that most people are still being used. I researched that human trafficking is the exploitation of others, through the use of force, coercion, abduction, fraud, deception and abuse of power. Most of these individuals are captured, transported and at times given away at a price to other people. I saw that it is a violation of human rights and privileges and is illegal whether to a foreigner or a citizen.
According to the articles I read, human trafficking was very much exaggerated in the early centuries where people used to sell out slaves. They were treated harshly and some even faced inhuman conditions. They were treated no less than animals. They would go for days without food and being beaten up. From this study of human trafficking, I have come to identify ways in which the UN is dealing with these issues. I have also become aware of certain activities happening around me and how I could help if I hear any cases of human trafficking. The main issue in all these is that though many people gained freedom and most countries are no longer being colonized, why is it that the human traffickers still are able to get access to people and manipulate their lives? Is it by choice or chance that it is now more active than the early days?
Here are the responses back;
You picked a very fascinating topic to write about and it seems like you looked into it extensible. I know that this is a big issue in Asia perhaps that could be one of the areas you could focus on in your narrative.
I think this is an interesting topic, but I don’t think it meets the requirement for our first paper. This paper is a narrative essay on a personal experience and what you learned from it. Unless you have firsthand knowledge of human trafficking, you may want to consider another topic. You may be able to use this for our next assignment, which is a persuasive essay.
I have attached the grading rubric,
If you have any additional questions, please do not hesitate to message me.
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||10/11/2015 07:00 pm