Project #88146 - market assignment (just do the revision based on the feedback )

Our team wrote the mkt assignment and we got feedback from the professor, and we need a revision based on his feedback. I will put the attached file for what we've done and its related information tha we found.

 

Here is an instruction for the market assignment.

Describe the industry in which the business will operate.

  • Describe the competitors (who are they, location, strengths, weaknesses, etc.) in the market in which you will compete.
  • Describe how your non-profit organization will provide a competitive advantage over competitors.

And this is our feedback.

- Please organize in sections

- Don't include unneeded information; not directly associated with section.

- Write a short sentence rather than a long or multiple sentences.

- I don't see information about how you will compete.

- The competitor analysis needs to be better delineated and organized.

- Provide more information using numbers about the industry and size of the problem.

Based on the feedback, please improve what we've written. Also, there is an some information based on our research I will put those in two seperate attached files.

 

 

 

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Due By (Pacific Time) 10/23/2015 01:00 pm
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