Good evening to all you wonderful scholars,
Due date is 10/31/15 @ 7pm pacific time.
Notes from instructor about rough draft of attached original paper…
You're in good shape with this draft! You described the experience for your reader and began to discuss how it affected you. I noted a few areas where you could add more information to expand or clarify your point to the reader. I'd also like you to consider adding some reflection before your conclusion to show the reader the long-term effects of this experience.
Once you finalize content, make sure that you proofread before submission. I noticed a few minor typos, but no major issues with your writing. Your draft is clearly organized, too, and it follows APA format correctly.
If you have any questions, please let me know.
Here are the guidelines for revised paper
For this milestone, you will submit the final draft of your narrative essay. It is to be a revised version of the first draft, which was due at the end of Module Three. As such, it will tell of a personal experience of yours and use the account to make a larger point or illustrate a bigger idea. It must be at least 2 and no more than 3 pages long and follow MLA or APA conventions.
I have included the original paper and grading rubric
|Due By (Pacific Time)
||10/31/2015 07:00 pm